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作为一名译员,最高兴的事情就是帮助客户解决了因为语言交流产生的问题。
译者父母心,这是我一直告诉我的口译学生的话。
最近做了一些笔译的工作。其中,应B&S的邀请,为他们的网上隐私声明做了本地化的翻译(本地化指英到中的翻译),恰好泛世纪我的学员们有些预备参加即将举行的三级笔译考试,在此,我把我的译稿中的部分内容在空间里展出一下,请大家批评指正,也给有需要的同学提供一些我力所能及的帮助。
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原文:
B&S, Inc. Online Privacy Statement
B&S respects your privacy and is committed to protecting the personal information you share with us. This statement describes how B&S collects and uses your personal information to provide services that you request or when you choose to provide us with your personal information.
Information Collection
Personal information means any information that may be used to identify an individual, including, but not limited to, a first and last name, email address, a home, postal or other physical address, other contact information, title, occupation, industry, personal interests, and other information when needed to provide a service or product or carry out a transaction you have requested.
When you browse our website, you do so anonymously, unless you have previously registered with us. We do not automatically collect personal information, including your email address. We do log your IP address (the Internet address of your computer) to give us an idea of which part of our website you visit and how long you spend there. But we do not link your IP address to any personal information unless you have registered with us. Like many other commercial websites, the B&S website may use a standard technologies, such as “cookies” and other HTML tools, to collect information about how you use the site or to record that you opened an email marketing message. Please go to "Cookies and Other Tracking Technologies" below for more information.
B&S collects personal information when you register with B&S for a B&S account, when you use certain B&S products or services, when you register to attend a seminar or participate in an online survey, when you ask to be included in an email or other mailing list, or when you submit an entry for a sweepstakes or other promotions, or when you submit your personal information to B&S for any other reason. From time to time, B&S receives personal information from business partners and vendors. B&S only uses such information if it has been collected in accordance with acceptable privacy practices consistent with this Privacy Statement and applicable laws.
我的译稿如下:
B&S有限公司 在线隐私声明
B&S尊重您的隐私,并致力于保护您向我们提供的个人信息。本声明描述了B&S如何收集和使用您的个人信息,并由此为您提供您所需要的或您因为向我们提供个人信息而获得的服务。
信息的收集
个人信息是指任何能用于认定个人身份的信息,包括但不仅限于姓名,电子邮件地址,家庭、邮政或其他实际地址,其他联系信息,称呼,职业,行业,个人兴趣及其他因为提供某项服务或产品所需要的信息,或者您需要完成某项交易而需要提供的信息。
当您浏览我们的网页时,您自然是不留下姓名的,除非您在此之前已经向我们进行了注册。我们不会自动收集包括您电邮地址在内的个人信息。我们会记录您的IP地址(您计算机的网络地址)以便知道您浏览了我们网页的哪一部分以及停留时间。但是,除非您之前已经向我们注册过,我们不会从您的IP地址链接至任何个人信息。跟很多其他的商业网页一样,B&S网页也将使用一种标准技术,如“cookies’”和其他HTML工具来收集有关您如何使用本网页的信息或记录您打开了一封促销电邮。请到以下“Cookies和其他痕迹科技”处查看详细。
B&S在以下情况下收集您的个人信息:当您向B&S注册一个B&S帐号的时候,当您使用某项B&S产品或服务的时候,当您注册以出席研讨会或参与在线调查的时候,当您要求列席一封电邮或其他邮件列表中的时候,或者当您登记以获得将近或其他奖励的时候,或者当您因为任何其他原因向B&S提供您的个人信息的时候。有时,B&S从商业伙伴和卖方那里接受个人信息。B&S仅在这些信息是以本隐私声明和相关法律许可的手段收集而来的时候使用它们。
注:以上内容,如有借鉴需要,请事先联系我;) |